under construction

This where you tell me:

→ How my character is faring.
→ How the structure of my character is
→ What I am doing wrong.
→ What I can do to improve.
→ What I excel at
→ My weaknesses and stuff
→ Anything else you want to tell me about
→ Constructive criticism only, please don't flame me.

Thanks,

TAREI ♥